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Full Horse Offline Bonafide Bro

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4th March 2013 01:15 AM
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this was my contribution to a thread on 4chan challenging anyone to write, compose, and release a pony related song in less than two hours, because I'm perfect I did it in one. If you're offended by curse words or sex jokes, grow up.


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Skelndox Offline Just another tombstone

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4th March 2013 01:24 AM
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I had to stop halfway through.

While from a technical standpoint, you weren't terrible, the lyrics were both awful and disgusting. I don't understand why 'pony rappers' feel the need to fill a song about the show with lyrics that represent the polar opposite of what the show's about.

Your lyrics remind me of Yelling At Cats, and that's not a good thing.
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Desert Rein Offline A little chaos never hurt anyone

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5th March 2013 07:53 PM
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Yeahhh... crosses a few too many lines for me.
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Tute Away will miss you

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8th March 2013 05:11 AM
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I have to fully agree with Dalndox, the lyrics are just terrible.Other than that, you do have something to work with.
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ZetsuXIII Offline How Ticket!

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18th March 2013 07:19 PM
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A) Yes. Dig the beat hardcore.
B) Nah, man. The lyrics are basically the same as every other mlp "rap". It basically says "Look at me, I'm a brony, I'm better than you, and I'm totally gangsta about it". Yeah, I get it, it's a motif, but it's a worn motif.

You got the rhyme, you have a method. But you lack the reason, and the madness.
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Full Horse Offline Bonafide Bro

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20th July 2013 02:43 PM
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lol, "disgusting"? "gangsta"? Are you people serious? I'll just repost what I said at the top of the thread because apparently you all didn't read it the first time.

Quote:this was my contribution to a thread on 4chan challenging anyone to write, compose, and release a pony related song in less than two hours, because I'm perfect I did it in one. If you're offended by curse words or sex jokes, grow up.

By the way, Yelling at Cats couldn't lace my boots.

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Runic Away Drink your GODDAMN TEA

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20th July 2013 03:04 PM
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We did read it

Just because you said that doesn't mean we can't comment on how shit your lyrics are. Two hours for 4chan or not.

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20th July 2013 04:04 PM
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(20th July 2013 02:43 PM)Full Horse Wrote:  I'll just repost what I said at the top of the thread because apparently you all didn't read it the first time.

No, I read it.

(4th March 2013 01:15 AM)Full Horse Wrote:  If you're offended by curse words or sex jokes, grow up.

Grow up? Really?

If you're going to be rude, don't bother.

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20th July 2013 04:13 PM
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(20th July 2013 02:43 PM)Full Horse Wrote:  lol, "disgusting"? "gangsta"? Are you people serious? I'll just repost what I said at the top of the thread because apparently you all didn't read it the first time.


By the way, Yelling at Cats couldn't lace my boots.

yo dude there's a difference between being offended by something and thinking it's shit

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20th July 2013 05:57 PM
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(4th March 2013 01:15 AM)Full Horse Wrote:  If you're offended by curse words or sex jokes, grow up.

If you think that's maturity, then I suggest you grow up.

(20th July 2013 02:43 PM)Full Horse Wrote:  lol, "disgusting"? "gangsta"? Are you people serious? I'll just repost what I said at the top of the thread because apparently you all didn't read it the first time.

If you can't handle people liking your music then don't post it.

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Full Horse Offline Bonafide Bro

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20th July 2013 06:11 PM
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Quote:Grow up? Really?

Yes, really. I'm amazed at how many people in this fandom can't handle blue humor and grown up words.

I understand if it's not to your liking. You can dislike the lyrical content all you want, that's your opinion. But the moral outrage is i get from people is ridiculous. It's a 2 minute cypher about nothing. It's clearly in good fun.

Quote:If you think that's maturity, then I suggest you grow up.
Making dirty jokes is not a sign of immaturity. Attacking someone for telling them most definitely is. Not everyone has to fit in your little box of what's acceptable.

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20th July 2013 06:14 PM
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Nobody's having a moral outrage over this. People just don't like your rap.
Get the fuck over it.

Here, I'll tell you why your lyrics are bad, it's because they're obnoxious. I have so little interest in listening to somebody swear, inflate their own ego, and make sex jokes about ponies for two straight minutes, it's not even funny.

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20th July 2013 10:41 PM
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Congrats on being what is basically the Insane Clown Posse of pony rappers.
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20th July 2013 10:55 PM
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(20th July 2013 06:14 PM)Chaos Wrote:  Nobody's having a moral outrage over this. People just don't like your rap.
Get the fuck over it.

Here, I'll tell you why your lyrics are bad, it's because they're obnoxious. I have so little interest in listening to somebody swear, inflate their own ego, and make sex jokes about ponies for two straight minutes, it's not even funny.

It's a couple lines. The sex jokes make up less than 30 seconds if even that. So yes, you're all very much overreacting. As for swearing, ya caught me. Inflating my own ego? Umm not quite. Talking yourself up is a big part of rapping, especially in pointless little cyphers like this. Notice how I'm not the one being hostile here. This is ridiculous.
(20th July 2013 10:41 PM)Lazer Loop Wrote:  Congrats on being what is basically the Insane Clown Posse of pony rappers.

You mean those guys with a 3 decade career, millions of dollars, and a huge following? Thanks!

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20th July 2013 11:07 PM
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(20th July 2013 02:43 PM)Full Horse Wrote:  lol, "disgusting"? "gangsta"? Are you people serious? I'll just repost what I said at the top of the thread because apparently you all didn't read it the first time.


By the way, Yelling at Cats couldn't lace my boots.

Why did you resurrect this.

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Toga Offline this is a wood

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20th July 2013 11:11 PM
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We're only saying that your song made in one hour is bad.

You're the one overreacting to the criticism of your song.
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Nemesis Online Boooooooks...

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20th July 2013 11:20 PM
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If you can't take criticism of your work, you shouldn't share it.

People have offered their opinions, and you have decided to brush them off, and in quite the arrogant manner. This is why people have decided to start being hostile.

As such, since I can't see this going anywhere good, I'm going to go ahead and lock this.

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